I'm not sure this is the place for it, but hell, it's worth a shot. I wrote a SW script a year ago, and am looking for reads. I took the prequel universe after Ep III and shook it up. It's a self contained adventure, but could easily be augmented to meet a three picture arc.
This is a full-on, honest to goodness sequel to Episode III, that closes some gaps, introduces new, fresh ideas, and continues on the journey of one of the SW universes most beloved of characters.Opening crawl:
It has been ten years since the rise of the Empire. Executive Order 66 has all but wiped out the Jedi order, and only a handful remain.
It is a fragile time in the galaxy, for a new fear is spreading. Younglings are being taken from their homes. Dozens have vanished without a trace.
The nature of these disappearances seems random, and the Empire has denied involvement. Fearing talks of rebellion, Emperor Palpatine has dispatched his most trusted servant, Darth Vader, to investigate...
I have stayed true to the lore, and have some REALLY nerdy references in there for the most devout of fans. If any of you have the time, I would really appreciate it!
* How is the tone?
* Are the characters true to their previous incarnations?
* How did you find the plot?
* Were you surprised by any of it?
* Is it a fun read?
* Is there anything you'd wish to see more of/less of?Link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2Vbxe ... sp=sharing