It's a little messy and the effects on the faces are inconsistent, but the composition is on-point.
Yes, yes. Also, to my peculiar eye the inconsistencies in facial texture/lighting have a triangulation and depth of their own which is the goobers. If I were a Real Artist I would think of stuff like that with my own brain. And I like the mess, too. There is far too much of the wrong kind of mess fronting itself in these worrisome days. Just padding that post count, post count, though I AM actually in the middle of watching a movie and I wrote a poem the other day which Denise liked and we have had enough rain that the yard needs moving and there was a meteor shower last night and the solar eclipse is going to be a top draw for the East coast and the hummingbirds are getting fat in preparation for their gazillion mile migration and I rolled the neighbor's trash cans down to their house and their two Great Danes came out and were all barking at me so poor pregnant Kelly had to come out and monitor them so I wouldn't be eaten or shoot my pants and when it gets dark you can hear the stars and the teen suicide rate has surpassed the teen homicide rate because of social withdrawal because of the proliferation of smart phones, social media, boredom and have a nice day.